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Post by Nightshadow on Jan 30, 2008 11:01:35 GMT -5
She was nealing down at a small river, letting the cold water wash away all the memories of last night. She held the water in her cupped hand as she lifted her pale arm, letting the cold watter dropplets run down her skin, washing away all of the dried blood. She didnt even know whose blood it was, they were dead now, thats all that matters. She stood up and watched the blood mix with water and run down her arm, making a small pink puddle on the ground beside her. She sied as she pushed a small lock of silver hair out of her eyes, and jumped, face first , into the river. She hit the bottom with a small thud and let out a small breath of air. Nightshadow watched her eyes grow dark and fuzzy. She hoped that this time, it would finnaly work. She lost consiousness and floated to the top of the river, carring her body with the flow.
(hehehe school sucks,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i put a LOT of commas in my writing dont i?!)
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Post by Takashi (Mr. ChickenFingers) on May 6, 2008 22:14:38 GMT -5
He was walking along the riverbank, exhausted from the past encounter. As he neared the water's edge, he came across nightshadow and quickly dove behind a tree as not to disturb her. He gazed carefully onward, perplexed by her beauty.
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Post by Nightshadow on May 7, 2008 9:42:17 GMT -5
(awwwwwww)
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